I loved it when he stroked past my prostate because I got almost unlimited stimulation as he stroked in and as he pulled out.
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Being gay is not something that I have let anyone know about. The only person that I told was my best friend. He shocked me by admitting that he had been having fantasies about guys and figured that he was gay too. We fooled around in experimentation, but didn’t go too far. For some reason we just weren’t attracted to each other like that; we were like brothers.
This brings me to my brother. Maybe I should give out some names and descriptions before I go on though. I’m John, 5’9″, 175lbs, lightly muscled, and brown eyed. Right now, my hair is dyed black from my usual brown and I’ve got a streak of green going through the middle. It’s a spiky combed look that is short in places with a mock bang. Think of something like the lead singer of Fall Out Boy. Very Chic.
My brother, James, looks like me in a toned down traditional good boy sort of way. He’s five years older than my 21, and about four inches taller than I am. He looks like an amplified version of me but his hair grows shaggily around his ears.
My best friend, Johnathan, yeah I know it’s weird, all theses J’s. People see us and call us John-John. Anyway, he’s even more outlandish than I am. I almost couldn’t remember that his hair is honey blond because it hasn’t been that color since we were in tenth grade. His vibrant blue eyes often offset his dark look that he’s created. He often looks a little Goth, but it’s a toned down version. He’s about my height, we’re the same age, but he’s a bit slimmer than...
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Well I thought it was a beautiful story of love and budding relationships
What the hell? The premise is good. A quadruple coming out story, but reliving the days events four times? I feel like I went 8 rounds with multiple personalities, each one retelling the store from their perspective. I felt anxious waiting for another personality to surface.
It is a shame this author relied on flipping between first person accounts instead of developing the story through the eyes of a primary narrative character. A better technique would have been first person conversations with the other three characters. At least then we might have been able to keep the brother and friends from merging in a muddle of J’s.
I kept wanting it to get better. I continued to read thinking we would eventually get to a main story and the it was finished.
It was difficult to follow at times but so what..this is not great literature. Very cute story and hot sex with twenty year olds. Four guys finding love.
Some of the worst writing on Udatz. I can echo Average Bear TN word for word. I made my way to the end. And while essentially reflecting the angst of coming out the writing is so horrible I could only rate an overly generous 3.
This story is extremely hard to follow with the names starting with “J” and then two of the characters being called by two diferent names. That on top of not knowing which person is telling the story makes for a difficult read. I went through the first two parts and couldn’t finish. The story has great possibilities. The remarks are meant to be constructive and not critical.
A true love story dont waste what if as i say go for the gusto if you want go get
Really hard to follow this jumping from one telling the story to a different one. And the similar names made it worse. Very convoluted story line & slow-moving.