I wanted this big hairy man to be holding my cock and balls. I wanted to feel his mouth around my cock. I wanted to feel is cock in my mouth. And God help my I wanted to feel his cock slipping in and out of my hole.
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I had been in college for a year when it happened. The one and only time that it happened. I can’t say why I did it, I don’t really think about it when I can help it. I don’t really know why I’m telling you this now. But I guess sense I started I should keep going.
My name is Jason, I’m 19 years old. I’ve never thought that I was attractive, except that one night. I’m kinda short for a guy, five nine and a half and a hundred and fifty pounds. I have short brown hair, and green eyes. I don’t go to the gym but I have an alright body I guess, I mean I work outside for a landscape company so I spend a lot of time lifting heavy things.
On this day I was wearing a pair of jeans that an old girl friend had called my “good ass jeans” I don’t really know what that means but any way, and a white t-shirt. I was walking across the quad heading back to my apartment after class when I first saw him. He was tall and broad shouldered. His hair was black, the beautiful shinny kind of black, he was dressed in a loose pair of jeans and a button down shirt. The shirt was open a little at the collar and you could see a few hairs just peaking out of the gap.
I just looked at him for a moment, and then kept on walking. Sometimes I looked at...
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Skyreader, Lp, et al: Grammar and spelling errors resulted in lost erections? Really! Hey, I’m a member of the National Council of English Majors, always proofread my work, and have taught writing classes. The fiction on Udatz and Nifty is infested with grammar and spelling errors, and I don’t seem to have any problem getting aroused by hot gay sex.
I don’t understand why there are so many errors; even writers who turn out sexually stimulating and well-structured, extended erotic fiction are afflicted. What I object to more than spelling errors is the frequent use of properly spelled demeaning language directed at men receiving sexual attention: “cunt”, “bitch”, “slut”, “whore”, faggot, fag, and so on. The men whose mouths express this contempt are often themselves gay men participating in the same sex scenes a the “bitches” and “sluts”. This seems to be an ugly carryover from the routine misogyny common among straight men.
The young man got something so many guys like him need — to be overwhelmed and swept away by the heat and dominance of another man. As others have commented, too many spelling errors — grown for groan, for instance. Wonder of that’s about a failure of dictation, spellcheck or other tech glitch. The writer is too good to have made these mistakes without a reason.
As has already been said many times, this could have been a great story, but the numerous grammar and spelling mistakes ruined it for me. Sorry. Spelling and grammar checks are available for free. Please download them today and try again! I’d like to hear how Jason gets bored with fucking his wife and decides he can’t live without cock!
A Hot first time!
Can’t believe he chose staying straight!
The short story was fun, but the errors jumped out at me like frogs. I hate to be picky, but editing would help. Starting at the beginning. Examples:
io. abbreviating for ” instead of”: shinny io shiny, peaking io peeking, hanson io handsome, many io manly, needing io kneading, load io loud, I io A, his io my, “ok with me fucking me?”
The beauty of this story is that this can happen to any one of us at any time we choose. We simply have to open ourselves up to the possibility and take Luke’s role and “go for it.” Just ask. What can it hurt? I mean, every guy I know just wants to get off…and instead of fucking a watermelon or a vacuum cleaner….just get down with another dude!
While I enjoy reading of the lust and often love stories of Udatz’, I always remember the reality of anal sex. Without serious forethought, planning, and cleansing, it’s just downright nasty and messy. I’ve had experiences with women, men, myself, always nasty and messy without the above mentioned efforts. Those experiences were much less than erotic in the final outcome.
I am so glad I’m getting these posts from Udatz! They are so hot!! I’m wet with pre-cum, but I didn’t try to stroke, because I have some more work to do. You don’t have to post this publicly if you don’t want to. I sometimes am afraid that I chose the wrong career. Instead of music (Masters in Piano Performance) and computers (hardware and software), I should have been a high school English teacher. I love your posts, but either the auto-correct in your text processor or the writer is so drawn into his story, that spelling and grammar are a problem. I don’t really mind it so much, because I can certainly catch the hot story, but I have a visceral/unconscious reaction to these grammar and spelling errors. Could you mention this to your writer(s) for me? Thanks! And again, I have enjoyed every single post I have read, and my towel collection is showing excess wear and tear!
I agree, there are so many spelling mistakes and improper word usage that it ruined it for me. I stopped counting at 25 mistakes and there were many more after that.
You will never enjoy sex with a woman as much as you enjoyed your first and only time with a man!!
Hot i wish that happened to me my frist time