His body was slim with naturally defined muscles under the pale skin and he either shaved his body or was practically hairless. His half hard cock was bigger than expected and I looked forward to seeing it fully stiff.
Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | Part 6
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Autumn was closing in; the nights were getting cooler although the days were still warm.
I had come into town to meet with a new client, a farm supply business that had been in the same family for three generations. The current owner had told me that the business was a mess. That was severely understating the problem.
As I came out of the business’s doorway onto the sidewalk, my arms full of boxes and bundles of paperwork; I felt good anticipating the work ahead of him. It was going to be like solving a puzzle; the books were in such a tangle.
I didn’t even feel someone barreling into me but the next thing I knew, I was laying on the sidewalk with a snow of paperwork swirling around me.
“Hah, hah, sorry sucker. I must not have been looking where I was going.” a voice said.
I looked up and saw that it was one of the Satans standing over me, the one who’d been burned in the fire. He had red patches on his face and neck and his once long hair was short fuzz now.
He spit on the sidewalk beside me, then turned and walked across the street. I sat up and looked after him.
The Satan reached the other side and as I watched, he walked a half block and turned down into an alleyway. At the same time, I noticed a young man standing directly across, staring at me. The owner of the farm supply business came outside and when I glanced back across...
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I just have to say, having grown up in the south and on a ranch I loved the story, all but the sex part, not to say that I didn’t enjoy that however; why do all the sex partners have huge organs. I know we are all led to believe larger is better. NOT so! I did a little investagating, there are at this moment 3,892,016.000 men in this world and the average size of the erect male is 5.14 inches, out of which a 7 inch cock is 7 out of 1,000; blacks average 5.8 inches. The men in this story are all huge?? What about the young men who are gay take that as the ultimate… gonna set some kind of goal. and never achieve finding it. It sets unrealistic goals. That and THAT alone is the only ‘flaw’ in the story… I have had a family much like the family of men and yes we all fucked around with each other. And that was a bale LOL of fun, and that is not always the case on ranches or farm..
Keep up with your writing,,, the story in my mind was believable with that one exception. I can accept the premise of writer’s liberty of exagerating… that’s what this site is all about.. and I do love the site. And MORE than that I LOVED the premise of the story but why perpetuate gay life being one huge cock after another. It sets the young gay men with a goal they may never achieve.
I know this missive is far to serious,, sorry for that. I love the background of the story and I’d like you to write more. You have a definate flare for the craft. !!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am really enjoying this novella. I hope it doesn’t end soon!! Can’t wait for the next installment.
Maybe 1 more so Andy commits to Bennie and Tony finds someone other than the daddy and uncle.
I love ? reading this novelty story, never ends, keep it coming would like to know what happens next,…..
Ok now tony a killer is steve next i don’t think so i love for this to go a few more chapter dad has cody steve has will andy has breinne who does tony a have the Sheriff need more
I love the series idea. Need to write this up and sell it to hbo or Netflix.
This is probably one of the best gay series of stories that I’ve ever read. The plot is well developed and thought through. I am so enjoying reading this series. PLEASE, please keep this going.
Here here!
Sometimes a closed book is best kept that way. I’m not sure I want to read Andy’s book.
But think of this, we’re reading an adult gay story and we’re dissecting characters, structure, and plot…great compliment.
The next on Steve will kill lol
You know? I wonder. It is sort of an erotic murder mystery isn’t it. Kinda missed the sheriff in #7. He was there but relations seem to have cooled.
I hope you make this into a complete series
You would make a great book with several books
This is a story that can go forever
I only hope you see the potential it has to keep going
So many people don’t see where the potential is to make a great book
I heartily agree with you Eric. Some disturbing parts for sure – but this is a fictional novel not a news report. One can’t assume Andy killed his ex in the big city. Implication is there but part 7 might have answered some previous doubts. I hope this evolves for several more parts. And would happily buy the book on Amazon.
I hope there is one more part. At least.. story seems unfinished.
Feel like we’re on hold, the story does not seems to be finished……
and as long as we’re sucking air LIFE is unfinished,,, right